MysteryGuest said:Marvellous - terse, imitative of the bulletin board style, implying more than it reveals, referring to the haiku tradition but moving it forward with a new syllabic structure and the use of smilies. I like it.
marty21 said:
Divisive Cotton said:Go on... you were gonna do that anyway... you were just playing with us you little tease...
The next time I order from amazon...
Why don't you give us an example now... go on... show us what to expect...
congratulations!marty21 said:I'd just like to say
that i have have just had a book published... a book of poetry
and i'm a very happy chappy
perhaps we could now have a competition for urban laureate...Brainaddict said:Congratulations marty - we expect you to be poet laureate within the decade
MysteryGuest said:A few week's ago Pickman's Model (I think) made a comment about how so many people when they're trying to write poetry use the word "shards". Then by pure coincidence the great poet Cheesypoof posted up a, erm... "interesting" poem that had the word "shards" in it.
It was all perfectly amusing. If you were there. At the time.
erm...
marty21 said:
marty21 said:PUSH
the door closes and
I push you against the
wall and kiss you
I wish you were wearing a skirt
so that i could run my hands
roughly on your warm
skin
I smell your neck
and deeply inhale
a citrus smell which I like
you push me back
and we topple to the
floor
you are on top now
and I feel you pushing down on my chest
your hands undo buttons on my shirt
and then you loosen my tie and pull it
over my head
the shirt follows and you scratch my chest
you own me now
I run my hands slowly up your back
as you kiss me
and then
stop
you undress
there you go, a little ode about sex in the office
