Song writing, but can't write music!

Discussion in 'music, bands, clubs & festies' started by Stanley Edwards, Sep 11, 2018.

  1. Stanley Edwards

    Stanley Edwards 1967 Maserati Mistral. R.I.P.

    I can hum it in my head..

    It is a thread for us musically inept wannabe song writers. This effort...

    "Baby let's go out tonight, there is nothing on TV.

    Baby let's go out tonight, just you and me.

    We will walk the streets for free. There is more at night to see.

    We can dance the streets for free, just you and me.

    A coffee on the terrace below the shadows of the palms, a long stroll along the shoreline listening to the calms.

    A shell for hearing magic, a pebble for our dreams. Pockets full of memories for a future more serene.

    Baby let's go out tonight, we can turn off the electricity. Spend our coins tonight on you and me."


    It isn't poetry :D
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  2. Humberto

    Humberto which shall devour the palaces of Bozrah

    I'm not being funny but the chooon of this kind of fits.

    I'm not tagging him, but Danny la Rouge would set you on the right path.

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