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In the sun-drenched smoke filled atmosphere, there is a dominant aura of sin

It'll probably be fine for an in-flight magazine. :p

Of course, Attention-Seeking, Pretentious AI is lagging miles behind, so there's still plenty of work to do on that front.
 
Sounds like the beginning a song lyric, to me...

In the sun-drenched, smoke-filled atmosphere,
there's a dominant aura of sin.
There's a time and a place, but there's no excuse,
to get to the state that I'm in.

Obviously, I don't write lyrics. :)
 
Cheesy

Why do I get the impression by reading your posts that by the end of every night's posting, you're to be found collapsed in a broken heap on the floor, bend double, with a bottle of vodka hanging out the side of your mouth like you're trying to blow the ship back into it?
 
In the sun-drenched smoke filled atmosphere, there is a dominant aura of sin. The prostitute's clothes smell of fumes as the economist pulls up in his highly polished Bentley.

"Want any business?" she asks, leaning into the cool air-conditioned car's window.

"Baby, I'm a business man. Get in!"

He pulls her over to him so that she is inches away from his face and whispers, "Can you tell me what I could follow this line with: 'In the sun-drenched smoke filled atmosphere, there is a dominant aura of sin'?"

She tilts her head back, cackles, and slowly starts to narrate:

"In the sun-drenched smoke filled atmosphere, there is a dominant aura of sin. The prostitute's clothes smell of fumes as the economist pulls up in his highly polished Bentley....."
 
equationgirl said:
You nicked bluestreak's work! I hope you have the decency to give him a cut of your fee.

:eek:

His was damn good as well.

it was freely given :D
 
Cheesypoof said:
In the sun-drenched smoke filled atmosphere, there is a dominant aura of sin... cant finish this, but it would lead to something nice I think. Have never had a word blockage this bad before. Would reading the likes of 'Wind in the Willows' help maybe, in the same way that listening to Mozart sharpens the mind a bit? who knows... :(

Just add 3 or 4 more cliches and you are there really.
 
fogbat said:
It'll probably be fine for an in-flight magazine. :p

Of course, Attention-Seeking, Pretentious AI is lagging miles behind, so there's still plenty of work to do on that front.

haha - brilliant :D
 
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